Thursday, 5 July 2012

Guided Reading short stories

Minecraft promblem ture story

It all started at 8:30pm in the world of minecraftea Ihad just loaded up the world and started to build a mud house when Josh joined my world and built a wood house. He built a wood house then we started to mine foud some iron ore so I went and made a stone pickaxe to harvest the iron ore. I went to my hut and crafted a furnace to smelter my iron ore to iron ignot but Josh killed my and stole my ingnot and crafted a iron pickaxe.

I had my revenge and my remaning iron ingot and left but josh invited his friend and Josh wanted the iron ignots so I gave them to him a little while later I found some flint but Josh's friend killed me and stole my stuff and made a flint and steel I was somewhere out so I didn't know he had a flint and steel. I heared a faint crackle of fire so I looked a the back of Josh's house and it was burning I called Josh and we put out the fire Josh gave a stone sword and I chased him up the mountain and into the forest, he started burning the forest down I set on fire so I ran for my life towards the sea but it was to late I died when got my stuff he tryed to blame me for it but we knew who was I stole the flint and steel but then I had to go so that was the end.

15 comments:

  1. It all started when i and my mate Josh went on minecraft. I loaded up a new world called the fish cast world.We both spawend in a forest bioem. Josh said he was going to get some wood while i would explore the amazing world. Few hours past and i heared Josh scream down the micrephone and i ran to him to see what the matter was. I stood there in shock. I could see the wood that Josh collected and i said to him what happend here? He replide and i was scared...

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  2. grate storie josh

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  3. Yes I agree that was a good story in fact me,Lauren and Saskia are making a story it is really good!OH by the way josh you started one of your sentences without a capital letter you need to remember that when you come to year six.Our story is called The mystery behind Neptune.

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  4. minecraft is the best game????????

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  5. Josh said it was herobrine but it cant be. I checked the menu to see if it was just another person greifing my world but it was herobrine. I ran as fast as i could back to spawn point. Soon i was back where Josh was but it was sun set was sunset...

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  6. It was halloween and my birthday,im sleeping in the back garden in my dads tent with my best friend [faith].I was exsited but then it was time to get in my tent,i was a bit scared faith made me lauph to hard i nearly started crying it was funny.then we started to get teard but we coulgent get to sleep becuse something shook my tentand made spookey noises i was brething so hard my heart coulde fly aot my mouth.Then we saw a shadow ,it was huge and terribly frightaning we screamed and shouted my my dad no anser i rang him his phone was off. we were realy scared we rang my dad again we hurd my dads phone nere my tent i went out side it was my dad by tiffany

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  7. I quickly climed a tree and then it was dark. I could see Josh down on the ground and i could see he was scared. I could just see Josh getting eaten or blown up by a creeper or zombie. Suddenly i saw five creepers heading Joshes way. I screamed down the micephone to warn him. HE was a dead man...

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  8. The creepers saw Josh and in the blink of an eye the creepers started to run after him then josh soon saw them too. He ran as fast as lightning and doged trees like a epic,pro ninja however, he was not safe. Josh just carried on running as fast as he could then suddenly, herobrine blinked in front of Josh then he was killed again. Josh spawned again then started to dig a underground base were we would both be safe. I jumped off the jungle tree and lost two and a half lifes. We were safe for now. It was was a minecraft mornig and josh went off again to get some wood but this time he made a wooden spear...


    Please coment and say if i should carry on with the adventures. Peace out :D

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  9. I woke in my house it didn’t look normal so I headed out side and it was all pixelated world I look around I them I realise I was in my Xbox so I quickly invited Josh and Connor to the game we built an iron block house. Then Josh made a mine and found loads of diamonds so we made armour. Finally we built a mob trap.
    We made a crop farm so we could make bread and sugar. Then we kill some pigs to get some pork chops. All of a sudden Maria appeared from nowhere so we invite here to our house it was getting dark so we made diamond sword and killed everything in our way and we had enough gunpowder to make six stacks of TNT so we went to sleep and the next day we blew a hole in the mine and found loads more diamonds in a cave.
    All of a sudden when we were coming out of hole a creeper popped up and blew up Maria luckily she survived and ate cake a creeper started running and Maria followed the creeper was slayed and we went to bed and we woke up in our house but we knew that we could go back to minecraft any time.

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    1. Some good writing William - remember commas to mark clauses!

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  10. me and josh were looking through the woods ttrying to find lava to make obsidian we found it and we got a bucket of water . after that i started to mine the obsidian i had created. then we got our diamond ready to make a never portal i had made then i told josh to come down into the never . we went to find glow stone but then josh said who's that up there and then i said i dont now but the the myterious man started toget closerthen he started to attack with more people who looked like him it was pig men we ran back to the never portal we made it but bairly back alive it was looky for this time

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  11. Did you like the episodes? Please comment the storys and please say if you want us to do more. Peace out. :D

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    1. It's great to see you boys writing! I am very impressed!!

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  12. Hi its me Connor and im going to give you a quick secret of what im going to do in the minecraft episodes. Josh is not here because of that hes on minecraft on the xbox 360 and the best thing is that a update has come out how pro is that! Anyway i will be doing adventure sires and mabey even do youtube vidoes! Thats not all,i would like you to post a comment about if you want to be in the stories and if you want to be in the minecraft vidoes you need to have minecraft!!!

    Once again this is the FISH CAST! and peace out! :D

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  13. Mr.Aiston we are writting because we can write about minecraft and its a game that everybody can hear about not somthing like CODBO,MW3,MW2,CODWAW or Team fortress 2 wich is epic!!!

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